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You sat on the park bench, staring into space. The soft patter of the rain on the leaves kept you from drifting off and it helped soothed the pain.  You watched the events of the past hour run thru your head, each time more vivid than the last. Unable to bare it anymore, you cussed yourself out.
"Why am I so damn stupid!" you shouted, punching a nearby tree, shock waves running up your arm. You quickly pulled it back, and cradled it, the pain slowly easing. You looked down at your arm, your eyes widening. The busies seemed darker in the rain, and a few cut's had started to bleed. You gulped, and hung your head, your arm limply hanging by your side.
"(Name)?" You head shot up.
"A-Alfred." You stuttered, putting your arm's behind your back. But Alfred had already seen them. You looked away, tears pricking your eyes. You felt something drop on your shoulders. You looked back at Alfred, your eyes wide.
"Alfred." It was barley a whisper, but he heard it.
"Keep it." He mumbled, shivering as the wind blew. You thrust the jacked back at him, but he pushed it away.
"You need it more than I do." He said, before he took off running.
"Alfred, wait!" you shouted, but it was useless. He was already gone.

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So, iv had this idea for a while, and i dont know how to start it, so, id figured i'll let you read a little, and tell my if you like it.

Hetalia belong's to :iconhimaruyaplz:

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You belong to :iconsexyamerica3plz:

EDIT: this scean comes later on in the story, so dont freak out when i dont countinue from here, k?

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~MurderScreamer Oct 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
: :3 I luvs it <3
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~AlfredJ64 Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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:iconmeili-qiang:
YOU MUST CONTINUE JEFREKMGERKGL
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~AlfredJ64 Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I SHALL!
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:iconnicky-hetalia:
I want ot know what happens next!!!!
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~AlfredJ64 Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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Mood: Love ~RAE8892 Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am intrigued! I so want to know what happens next! Please continue?
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~AlfredJ64 Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok. =)
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OMG
Please have more soon!~!!
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